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.My Missing Part

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MY MISSING PART

There' s nothing worse than living far away from home or our love.

This one is dedicated to all DA people who miss someone...



Download size is 5430x3000.

HDTV Wallpaper: [link]

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see also:



^_^

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Awards:
:bulletblue: 3rd place in "Conceptual photography contest - LOVE" held by *colorful-child [link]
:bulletblue: 1st place in "My Passion" contest held by *Aziot [link] :love:

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Features:
:bulletgreen: [link] by *undertheradar-club
:bulletgreen: [link] by *niwaj
:bulletgreen: [link] by ~abshire
:bulletgreen: [link] by *orchidelutza
:bulletgreen: [link] by *moijoie
:bulletgreen: [link] by =wakiagaru
Image size
5430x3000px 3.08 MB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-TZ7
Shutter Speed
10/300 second
Aperture
F/3.3
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Sep 3, 2009, 7:24:05 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi, thanks for submitting to #Belle-Art .I'm part of the group's staff (and as voted by members, they would also like us to critique the deviations in that folder) so here it goes:

First of all, I like the minimalistic color scheme. I think it keeps things simple, without getting in the viewer's way of understanding the main concept.
As far as composition, I like the usage of light and dark space, and midtones. However, I consider the black frame a little too strong, even if it adds contrast. In my opinion, it could have worked in a dyptic, with the large preview of the puzzle in the left, and the "you" piece in the right side. I find the close-up of the empty space( even if it makes the idea much easier to understand) to not be absolutely necessary. Repetition is an important part of a good composition, but in this case I consider that the idea can be understood even without the upper close-up.
The idea of the missing piece of puzzle is not an original one, but I enjoy your interpretation of it. It shows creativity. I really like the special shape of the puzzle.
As far as lighting, I like the way it emphasizes the puzzle, but the repeating highlights bother me . They distract my view from the empty space, even if they add contrast to the entire piece.
Because those highlights are so strong in the upper part, you felt the need to add a lighter piece in the opposite side. That was a good choice , as it made a balance in the composition.
Keep up the good work !
And if you didn't <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="30" alt=":sleepy:" title="Sleepy - :sleepy:"/> fall asleep by now by my views, here is something for you : *gives cookie* .